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THE VIETNAM VETERAN . . . . .THE VIETNAM VETERAN, THE MINISKIRT, THE MANIAC, THE ASBESTOS WEIGHT LIFTER AND THE JEWa friend who left most of himself in some other country took me into a barintroduced me to some legs and a memory then bought me a beeror was some of that other country brought herethe puerto rican pool player smoked pot as he shotthe weight lifter cowered beneath his clothes(i did not see his muscles ripple as he coughed)there were clouds and long legs in sneakersthe enemy was there - the enemy was not therei shook his vice like a handand stared into his empty eyes unendingthe deep scar on his left cheek seemed the nicest thing about him(except maybe for his "suicidal tendencies" tatoo)i breathed deeply the pungent aircoughed up asbestos, drank